Losing Faith?
Archived under My Poetry .
Just when
It hits rock bottom
Has sunk
To indescribable depths
When
Prayers start to slack
So hard
To concentrate
When
Dispair kicks in
At loss
Unsure of rectifying
It's when
A reminder is sent
Hits hard
Sharp on target
It's then
The root is exposed
Distinct
There the problem lies
It's then
Then crystal clear
No doubt
Faith's not lost
© Umm Junayd, May 2008.
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Thanks for the comment 'Tony' (from Florida)... you have the right to express your opinion. But next time, don't use that 'sh' word on my blog.
Asa wrwb ukhti!
Masha'A, how very true... Often it's the minute and simple reminders that have the most profound effetcs upon our hearts.
May The Almighty bless you for this sis, ameen.
(P.S: I'm in the process of compiling beneficial blogs by sisters, for sisters, do I have your permission to list yours insha'A?)
Love you fillah
Your sis-in-Islam
Nadia
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Me too.. would like your permission to link you in my blog, InshaALLAH..
Asalaamualaikum,
I can't compose poetry to save my life! But i love the way people are able to condense & express so much thorugh the medium.
Your poem is spot on. I call it 'signs' from Allah when it happens in my life.
Wa 'alaikumus-salaam sisters!
It's so humbling to read your comments...JazaajunnAllaahu khairaa.
I don't think I need to give permission to link to my blog. If you find it beneficial then by all means link!
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kinda shitty. maybe work on not trying to sound SO PROFOUND and concern yourself more with sounding elegant, meaningful, or fluid, at the very least.