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'Aaisha's Love

Bismillaahi was-salaatu was-salaamu 'alaa Rasoolillaah. Wa ba'd:

Assalaamu 'alaikum wa rahmatullaah.

This is an excerpt from a children's poem I wrote earlier in the month. I think it's a little too 'cute', to be honest and have yet to read it to a child in the target audience group.

As always, please let me know what you think.

Shukran lakum.

Was-salaamu 'alaikum

~ Umm Junayd.

'Aaisha's Love

My name's 'Aaisha
I'm six years old.
I've got a little story
To be told.

There's someone special
Very dear to me.
Can you guess who?
Let's wait and see!

He's like no other
Certainly not!
He has special qualities
That no one's got.

He's there for me
Wherever I go.
My deepest secrets
He surely knows.

© Umm Junayd, December 2005

Comments

Assalaamu `alaykum

I hope you are well by the grace of Allahu Taala and are connecting your heart with Allahu Taala . Allahu Taala has kept our success , peace , tranquility and victory only in His obedience . Today majority of peoples are in difficulty and have no tranquility and peace because they are far from Allahu Taala . Peoples who are most in peace are those who obey Allah most .

[SNIP]

Edited by Umm Junayd to add:

While I appreciate a reminder, I do not think that this is the appropriate place for it to be posted. Comments should be on the topic matter. If you wish to send an extremly long email, please contact me instead.

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